Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that adhering to tradition is crucial for young people while others believe that the young should be given the freedom to express their individuality. I personally agree with the former group.
On the other hand, those who support the idea of individual freedom argue that young people should be free to express their unique personalities and ideas. They believe that it is important for young people to express themselves and pursue their own interests and passions. By being able to make their own choices, young people can develop a sense of autonomy and independence, which can be essential for their personal growth and well-being. Furthermore, some traditions may be outdated or even harmful, and it is important for young people to be able to question and challenge them.
Some people argue that young people should follow the traditions of their society. They believe that these traditions and customs have been developed over time and are an integral part of their cultural heritage. By following these traditions, young people can show respect for their culture and ensure that it is preserved for future generations. Moreover, following traditions can provide a sense of belonging and identity. A young person, for instance, can experience a sense of connection to their cultural history and a shared identity with others around them by taking part in religious or cultural celebrations with their family and community.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the young should be encouraged to follow the traditions rather than freely behave.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23015873016 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73542542947 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503968253968 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.970703231 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363534381737 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165506867398 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113785043725 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247034350833 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436506083249 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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