Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some argue that having a permanent job has a greater impact than job satisfaction, there are others who believe the opposite. From my perspective, job satisfaction is the more significant factor.
On the one hand, the option to have a permanent job is more crucial for some reasons. In terms of financial stability, job security provides employees with a steady income, allowing them to meet their financial obligations and plan for the future. Therefore, they do not have to worry about constantly looking for new employment opportunities. Additionally, employees who value opportunities for growth and development usually choose to stick to the job and they are likely to be willing to make sacrifices such as taking on jobs they do not enjoy or working long hours as it offers them career advancement, such as training, mentorship, and promotions.
On the other hand, I believe that there are some reasons why job satisfaction is highly valued. Firstly, it gives people a sense of fulfillment, which positively impacts their overall well-being. As a result, they are more engaged in work and feel more motivated, productive, and committed to their job, leading to better job performance, and employers are more likely to retain high-performing employees. Secondly, a satisfying job can help reduce stress and anxiety, which in turn can improve mental health. For example, my friend, who enjoys her job a lot, is always full of energy and devotes her effort and time to working and living fully.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that the importance of job satisfaction exceed that of job security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14661654135 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99436267222 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0097106348 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40498660942 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158194584081 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104220349435 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278563958258 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879297882787 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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