Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some argue that job security has a greater impact than job satisfaction, others believe the opposite. From my perspective, job satisfaction is the more significant factor.
On the one hand, job security is crucial for several reasons. In terms of financial stability, job security provides employees with a steady income, enabling them to meet their financial obligations and plan for the future. As a result, this eliminates the need to constantly search for new job opportunities. In addition, those who value growth and development usually prefer to stay in their jobs, even if they have to take on unpleasant tasks or work long hours, as it provides career advancement opportunities, such as training, mentorship, and promotions.
On the other hand, I believe that job satisfaction is highly valued for several reasons. Firstly, it gives people a sense of fulfillment, which positively impacts their overall well-being. Therefore, they are more engaged in their work, it makes them feel more motivated, productive, and committed to their job, which can lead to better job performance. Moreover, employers are more likely to retain those who are high-performing employees. Secondly, a satisfying job can help reduce stress and anxiety, which, in turn, can improve mental health. For instance, my friend, who loves her job, is always full of energy and devotes her effort and time to working and living fully.
For the reasons I have mentioned above, it seems to me that job satisfaction plays a more important role than that of job security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98314196779 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8269495864 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382315812312 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145497886076 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108668560952 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277961143919 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115637808195 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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