In this modern world, the internet becomes the most essential tool for our lives, especially, since it benefits our future education enormously. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that time spent studying on the internet is a time waste.
First of all, it can't be denied that studying on the Internet is efficient and interactive. The Internet provides students with a wide range of online resources. It helps us review old lessons and offers us extra knowledge. Furthermore, the Internet is also a powerful tool in education. this tool will be able to make our lessons more graphic. it is one way of supporting students ' study and helping them relax during the lessons. From that, students study without stress and pay more attention in classes.
secondly, studying online sets up self-studying skills. with high technology, the internet becomes an abundant source of information for students. this source is not limited to the knowledge at school. it assists students with updating their knowledge. In addition, it is so flexible that students can study every time and everywhere. They can choose some online courses which are suitable for their free time. Not only that, these days, there are many apps designed with a view to improving students' self-studying. Since studying through apps and videos are more attractive, children can study harder and better.
All things considered, studying on the Internet provides us with so many benefits. Moreover, students had better combine studying hard at school and self-studying online
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 61
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26422764228 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76656106677 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9814830157 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.1578947368 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9473684211 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233318352116 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781010704218 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777403650362 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162447494846 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465090342732 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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