It can not be denied that not only study at school everyday but study on the internet also important for student.From my point of view,I totally disagree with this opinion
First of all,to be a global citizen,we should try and practice using popular computer programs.For example,we can use Word to do homework and Powerpoint to make presentations .They benifit our future,Using computer assists us very much for our study and also for our future work,In this modern day and age,we should not let ourselves be out of date with this fast pace of life.
Secondly,nowadays,many study apps or websites are designed in order to not only support students'study but also offer them interests.It helps us relax after school during doing homework .Children will find study attractive and make it better.Moreover,sometime we can create a virtual meet to study and talk with our friend.It is a great way to make our study not boring and we also get more motivation.
To sum up, I am not agree with the opinion that study on the Internet is time wasted. Studying at school is essential .However,we can not deny that study on the Internet has many merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90206185567 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17673432664 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.684423144 49.4020404114 402% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.75 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.5 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267366618666 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182245120863 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426759784311 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18008307404 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792994830896 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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