You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Studying abroad may be one of the most beneficial experiences for a student. When studying abroad, students have the opportunity to study in a foreign nation and obtain an international degree which is an advantage for their future personal development and better job opportunities. However, students also have a number of difficulties such as language barrier and homesickness.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.
These days, with the significant growth of the country, study overseas has become an intergral part of the ongoing discussion. Many people believe that study abroad would be really benificial for student’s learning process and better job opportunities in the future. However, others argue that it also has some drawbacks. Discussed below will shed light the advantage as well as the disadvantage of this subject.
On the one hand, studying in foreign country has a lot of advantages. First and formost, it could helps scholars boost their soft skill. The reason is that students who live far from their homecountry need to be independent. That means they have to wake up by themselves without the help of their parents. Besides, they must get along with their roommate, then have a better communication, and solving problems skills. Secondly, students could have better understanding about the culture of other countries. It is because every nation has their own tradition so students can take part in the holiday that has in this country, try the local cuisine, and even learning the history of that nation. For example, when foreigners come to Vietnam, they often join Tet holiday and eat Trung cake, and from that they acknowledge about Vietnamese tradition.
On the other hand, studying oversea has some drawbacks. To commences with, it can make students feel homesick. It can easily be seen that scholars when live their hometown must be missing their homeland, parents, and even the dog that they’ve raised from the child. Furthermore, brain drain is the matter when we deal with this subject. To illustrate the point I would like to mention that the winner of the gameshow “The way to Olympia mountain” would be give a full scholarship to Australia to study universities. But according to the statistics of Vietnamnet, there is only one person come back to her homeland country Vietnam to persue her passion as an entrepreneur.
All In all, the below mentioned has outline the pros and cons of this issue. The drawbacks should be taken into account. People should optimize the benefit of the issue and find the way to minimize the disadvantage.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...advantages. First and formost, it could helps scholars boost their soft skill. The re...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'outlined'.
Suggestion: outlined
... All In all, the below mentioned has outline the pros and cons of this issue. The dr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05586592179 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71081722151 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2997776934 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1904761905 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262330360502 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669975546895 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533468943802 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14644808175 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545137524956 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...advantages. First and formost, it could helps scholars boost their soft skill. The re...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'outlined'.
Suggestion: outlined
... All In all, the below mentioned has outline the pros and cons of this issue. The dr...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05586592179 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71081722151 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2997776934 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1904761905 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262330360502 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669975546895 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533468943802 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14644808175 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545137524956 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.