Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
The world is growing in various different ways every-day. With this growth in various
spectrums, it is of utmost importance to move ahead with the everchanging world. Living in a
democratic society, it is essential to feel safe in your own surroundings, hence having a
strong military force proves to aid this feeling of safety. With growing nuclear strength all
around the globe, it is truly of the highest importance to invest a large amount of the nation’s
wealth into building a strong military team to provide safety to all the citizens of the nation.
The preference of amount of investment spent for military purposes should outweigh that of
the arts infrastructure of the nation. These arts could include anything from theatre to
clothing, etc.
A strong military force can prove to be much more important towards the overall
development of the nation. As we see in the world today, nations like China, India and the
United States of America dominate the economical market and are considered to be a
superpower. Most of the factors making them a superpower are calculated through the
military force they possess. While these nations do not lack behind in the artistical
department, a larger amount of the nation’s wealth is spent on the nuclear facilities, army
and navy and other military services required to maintain the overall safety of the nations.
Having these strong forces can aid to the overall development of the nation while also
keeping the citizens of the nation’s happy and content with their living situation. As the
feeling of safety is directly proportional to the overall wellbeing of individuals, these
investments help provide the citizens with maximum satisfaction, as the money invested is
what one considers, “Tax-Payers” money.
On the contrary, spending adequate amounts of capital on building artistical facilities is
crucial to grow into an economical power. Not as equals but artistic infrastructure proves to
aid the overall growth of the nation. The superpower nations in today’s day and age, along
with having strong military power, also possess a well-managed art industry. The arts and
entertainment industries like Hollywood and Bollywood, portray how much of a difference
having a monopoly in these industries make in putting a nation ‘on the map’ and making
them economically and socially sound.
However, the investments made into the arts and entertainment industry may not be as
important as the capital spent on increasing the military power of the nation, the government
should definitely try and have the money flow in the right direction. A strong military force will
prove to be more important in the long run. Nuclear and other machinery used for safety
purposes are being built every-day. These advancements make it very expensive for a
country to remain a global superpower, hence why the investments made should be
observed and scrutinized carefully. Therefore, it is very necessary that the government
utilises their investments opportunities carefully while keeping the overall well-being of their
citizens as the top priority
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
...y purposes should outweigh that of the arts infrastructure of the nation. These art...
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Line 23, column 25, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... facilities is crucial to grow into an economical power. Not as equals but artistic infra...
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Line 31, column 19, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...tion, the government should definitely try and have the money flow in the right direct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2674.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39112903226 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95803714326 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465725806452 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0331681879 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.619047619 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 36.0 4.97078651685 724% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239838905846 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069138144472 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696278430725 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523676212059 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649728982585 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.