A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Crime can be defined as a legal offence, which is comminted by disregarding the laws of a particular auhtority, and so such authority has the right to punish the person committing the crime. However, generally and more practically speaking, a person flouting any law in the country is said to perform crime. For instance, an act as marginal as evading a traffic signal to killing a person, everything is regared as a crime as there is the factor of disobeyance of the law of the country. It is to be understood that not all crimes are committed with the intention to harm someone or deceive someone. Crimes are committed based on various needs and situations a person lives in. I disagree with the claim due to many reasons and I would like to elaborate them in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, I would like to foucus on the Crime Rate of a country and the factors influencing such rate in any country. Crime rate is the measure of the crimes happening in a country as compared to others. In some countriues we see high crime rate as compared to other countries due to various factors like the litracy, living conditions, economy of the country and so on. I would like to underscore the relationship between the importance of the country's well being to the number of crimes committed in the country. We see in countries like America or England, the crime rate is ratehr low compared to countries like Iran or India, because the living condition on the former countries is rather rich and everyone is the country would is living a satisftied life. In countries like India or Iran, there is a high influence of religion and sense of supremacy. There is also a huge standard of living gap within the people of the country. For instance, within the city of Mumbai, there are billionairs and also sulms. There are people who go to lavish resturants every day and also people who struggle for existance. Due to such existing factors, there are incresed crimes in the country. For example, there are religious fights, or theft of money or possessions so the survival of people living in the slums will be better. This does not necessarily mean that the people should be deprived of the basic civil rights, but I strongly believe that the government shoul focus on this issues and make necessary plans and policies to reduce such Crime Rather rather than depriving such peopel of their rights.
Secondly, I believe that the reason for crimes in a country are the personal inconsistency or in ability to earn basic living. For instance, consider a family with only a mother and son, both illitrate and the mother is severly sick. The son himself being week and fragile having no means to earn money finds it easier to steal the required money from others so as to get medication and treatment for his mother. Here, the son commits a crime of theft but the main intention of this criminal act was the well being of his mother. In this scenario, it would obviously not be appropriate to ddeprive him of his civil rights or his right ot benefit from his own labour as the intention of the criminal here was only to help someone who means a lot to him. Rather than depriving the son of his rights, it is rather advisable to provide him with free treatment and a well earning job so to feed his family.
However, not all crimes are due to the hardships of the people performing crimes. For example, rapes in the country or shooting in an arena are not acceptable crimes and are needed to be taken more seriously. Those which are done with an inention to deliberately hurt someone is to be noted by the authority and in this scenario I believe not just depriving them of the right but also enforcing strict punishments on them like, imprisonment or life sentence depending on the sevearity of the issue will be apt. This punishments shall also serve as an example of a check on other criminals.
Therefore, it would be wise to conclude that not all crimes are done with an intention to harm someone, but for one's own survival and so not all of them should be deprived of basic rights. However, before imposing any punsihmnet on a criminal, the intention of the criminal must be understood and only if it is unreasonable, he must be punished to such extent that seems right so as to act as a check on other criminals. Thus I disagree with the statement however it might hold true sometimes.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... rich and everyone is the country would is living a satisftied life. In countries ...
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Line 3, column 1472, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ieve that the government shoul focus on this issues and make necessary plans and pol...
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Line 3, column 1543, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Rather
...plans and policies to reduce such Crime Rather rather than depriving such peopel of their rig...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eing week and fragile having no means to earn money finds it easier to steal the ...
^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...to steal the required money from others so as to get medication and treatment for his mo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 512, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...the sevearity of the issue will be apt. This punishments shall also serve as an exam...
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Line 9, column 378, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...unished to such extent that seems right so as to act as a check on other criminals. Thus...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s to act as a check on other criminals. Thus I disagree with the statement however i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 115.0 58.6224719101 196% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3616.0 2235.4752809 162% => OK
No of words: 780.0 442.535393258 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6358974359 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.28474030464 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62227097426 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402564102564 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1161.9 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3354191011 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.64516129 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1612903226 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12903225806 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.13820224719 350% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175584279152 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502435467354 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426504342448 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113475417206 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522108227817 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... rich and everyone is the country would is living a satisftied life. In countries ...
^^
Line 3, column 1472, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ieve that the government shoul focus on this issues and make necessary plans and pol...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1543, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Rather
...plans and policies to reduce such Crime Rather rather than depriving such peopel of their rig...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eing week and fragile having no means to earn money finds it easier to steal the ...
^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...to steal the required money from others so as to get medication and treatment for his mo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 512, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...the sevearity of the issue will be apt. This punishments shall also serve as an exam...
^^^^
Line 9, column 378, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...unished to such extent that seems right so as to act as a check on other criminals. Thus...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 422, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s to act as a check on other criminals. Thus I disagree with the statement however i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 115.0 58.6224719101 196% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3616.0 2235.4752809 162% => OK
No of words: 780.0 442.535393258 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6358974359 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.28474030464 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62227097426 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402564102564 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1161.9 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3354191011 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.64516129 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1612903226 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12903225806 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.13820224719 350% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175584279152 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502435467354 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426504342448 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113475417206 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522108227817 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.