In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is found that in some nations people are not as physically fit as they used to be and there is enormous declination in their health condition which results in obesity. The leading cause of this issue is excessive fast food consumption and lack of prolong fitness activities, which can be eliminated if there is proper focus on balance diet and exercise.
Frequent consumption of fast food is one of the prime causes of degrading health in people as it is filled with ingredients rich in carbohydrate and even contains higher level of sugary substances. What is more surprising is that most of the fast foods and junk foods are filled with chemicals that trick our brain to consume more of these products even if they are not essential to our body. Also, when people consume fat-rich food they must burn those extra accumulated fat to energy, which is not possible because majority of people are involved in sedentary lifestyle, just living their luxury life without minimal physical work that actually helps to burn fat. For instance, majority of the people from rich countries are engaged in scheduled indoor jobs involving less physical work and thus consume fast foods.
As a solution the people should be made aware about the adverse effect of fast food consumption so that they can focus more in balanced nutritional diets. Not only this, governments should impose high taxes to fast-food chains, forcing people to take fast food once a while and not in a regular basis. There should also be a policy to facilitate organic foods in co-operative organization so that people can get balanced diet according to their work environment. Even implementation of gym near workplace with access to office worker can act as the best approach to make them fit.
In conclusion, prosperous living and access to fast foods acts as a prime reason to increase obesity, and change in policies focusing on the balanced diet and exercise will be the appropriate solution to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as the best approach to make them fit. In conclusion, prosperous living and acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93993993994 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64093925446 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543543543544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0555865783 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.545454545 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152048311196 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639293676264 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364557980161 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945595122801 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401348572308 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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