The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated floor plans provide outline on how sports center of a University appears now and how its floor plan is modified in the future.
Overall, it can be observed that sports center will go through significant change and addition of facilities specially in the areas other than the main block in the center.
In present, the access to sports center is located in the center block towards its southern side. Reception is located right in front of the access point and there is changing room on its left whereas seating area on its right. 25 meter swimming pool is located right in the middle of the block and gym is on its northern side. Similarly, both outdoor courts are located towards the east and west of of the main block.
In future, there will be major changes by adding sports facilities and the space is properly utilized. The entrance and the main block will be almost same as present, however, it is extended towards its east and west adding more space to add café and sports shop respectively. Likewise, Changing room will be constructed on the right and left corners. Outdoor courts will be replaced by leisure pool on the western side which can be accessed by passing through sports shop and changing room. Similarly, in place of outdoor courts located on the east sports hal and dance studios will be constructed. Sports hall can be accessed through a passage from right side of the reception on the left side just after passing through café. Moving forward to the northern side there is door way to gym which is extended to its double size than the previous one, and on the way to gym towards its right dance studio will be constructed.
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...right dance studio will be constructed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, similarly, so, whereas
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 293.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72354948805 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36793668339 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430034129693 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9523767297 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11513176241 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521242403812 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454330276697 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922937232624 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595134353288 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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