Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As tourism has been growing at a rapid pace during the past decades, nowadays, it become the backbone of a country's economy. Apparently, many long-standing customs are being monetized. some oppose this, while others maintain that it can actually help such traditions. I will elaborate on the topic and share my opinion later.
We cannot deny the influence of tourism and the benefits it grants numerous countries. With the money gained from foreign visitors, people are capable of not only supporting their livelihood but also preserving their cultures as well. Specifically, those ventures may provide funds to protect and restore heritage sites or monuments. Moreover, tourism helps to spread long-honored cultures to the world and memorate them. also, local artisans might be widely acknowledged and receive enough income to continue producing more handicrafts or artworks.
However, the act of making money from traditional customs can induce detrimental effects on the tradition itself. For one thing, the massive influx of tourists also means damage to cultural heritage sites. For example, certain irresponsible visitors might carve their names on the sculptures or rock art. Furthermore, some cultures nowadays are being performed randomly on the streets by amateurs instead of professional artists on special occasions. this can belittle their values and meanings.
All things considered, I believe making incentives from traditional values has both positive and negative aspects. To alleviate the existing problems, several rules regarding the cultures and tourism should be established.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, as to, for example, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67916666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84231114393 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9065709442 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171762945014 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458915260325 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047602218364 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955793106773 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281611864498 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.07 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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