The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.
Provided are charts illustrating the data about the need for steel and the employees’ figure who worked in a nation over a one-year period. At the onset, the data for steel produced has seen a downward trend when the number of workers has the same pattern. On the contrary, the amount of actual demand experiences a fluctuation from January to December.
Turing to the first line chart, 4,000 million tonnes are produced doubling the demand for steel indeed in January. In the first quarter of the year, the statistic for steel manufactured reaches its pinnacle of 5,000 million tonnes while actual steel required also hits the highest point of 3,000 million tonnes some time afterward. After that, the production number remains intact from March to nearly July, then slightly falls to approximately 3,200 million tonnes in August. It climbs considerably to about 5,000 million tonnes in the third four months and sinks to the figure of 900 million tonnes at the end of the year. It is apparent that the data for needs for steel is witnessed an oscillation from March to October declining sharply to the statistic for 0 million tonnes in November. It is noticeable that the requirement for steel in fact rises speedily to 2,000 million tonnes which is 2.2 times the amount produced at the same time.
Regarding the second chart, the number of workers beginning with 5,000 thousand raises slightly to the peak of nearly 5,500 thousand in February. In March, it plunges dramatically to the figure of 3,000 thousand and stays stable until May. There the volume of total employees varies between 2,500 to 3,500 thousand from May to September. In the fourth quarter of the year, the number of total workers sinks significantly to 1,000 thousand individuals which is one-fifth of its starting point.
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- Question In many parts of the world children are given more freedom than in the past Is this a positive or negative development 78
- The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December 73
- The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 794, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...istic for 0 million tonnes in November. It is noticeable that the requirement for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, third, while, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99335548173 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55277947321 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8656940616 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241134270711 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969225193861 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600364914908 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176159429903 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076756450386 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.