The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.
Presented is a line graph illustrating the oscillation of steel production and consumption, as well as the number of employees in a particular country over a year. Overall, it is evident that the amount of steel produced and the number of workers employed both experienced downward trend, whilst the amount of steel demanded, which was lower than the produced one almost throughout the period, fluctuated around a certain point.
In regard to production and consumption, 4000 million tonnes of steel were supplied in January, which was twofold the actual demand. At the end of the first quarter, the amount of steel demanded exhibited a strong upward trend to 3000 million tonnes, while that of the production still stood at 4000 after reaching its own climax in February (5000). From April to July, steel production remained its stability at around 4000 million tonnes, whereas the figure of demand for this material hovered between 2000 and 3000 million tonnes. During the last quarter of the year, both steel production and consumption witnessed a downward trend in the amoun of steel, with the sharp drop to approximately 800 million tonnes of the former, and a concave decline to the bottom of the later in November, before making a quick recovery and bouncing back to the initial point.
Turning to the number of employees in this country, commencing at 5000 thousand workers in terms of absolute data, the quantity then peaked at over 5500 thousand in the following month. After experiencing a plunge to 3000 thousand people, its data leveled out and oscillated around the same amount until the end of August. Throughout the end of the period, there was a substantial concave downward trend to merely 1000 thousand workers.
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- Question In many parts of the world children are given more freedom than in the past Is this a positive or negative development 78
- The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December 73
- The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, still, then, well, whereas, while, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64745353511 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524475524476 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.064829968 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.222222222 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162980697577 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679215655126 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502533153721 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110318511171 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643358344724 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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