Your English-speaking friend, Clare, has recently gone to live in another city. Read part of her email below:
Well, I've now been here for two weeks and I'm beginning to get used to my new life here. I've certainly been very busy since I moved here- there have been all sorts of things happening! I'm quite happy in my new home although lots of my belongings are still in bags and boxes! I'm hoping to find time to unpack everything soon.
I'm glad I decided to come and live here- it's a really good city. But there are some things and people that I miss of course! It would be really good if you could come and stay with me here, perhaps in a couple of months when I really settle down. What
do you think? Keep in touch.
Clare
Write a reply to Clare. In your email you have to ask her what is happening to her, tell her to describe her new home, ask her to tell you what and who she misses after she moves there and suggest the time when you can visit her.
You should write at least 120 words.
Dear Clare,
How’s it going? I hope you are well. It’s such a long time since we last spoke. It’s great to receive your last letter. I’m really sorry not replying you sooner, but I have been so busy trying my best to complete my science project for my university graduation.
I have heard that you have some issues with your new place. What happen to you in your new house? Is it serious? Don’t be shy to share with me anything you are worried about as we are best friends. Actually, I haven’t been to that city before. Could you describe what this city has? Does it have many entertainment center for children, or breathtaking views like in my hometown?
It’s the first time you’ve gone to this place, so you must miss someone right? Who are they? Maybe I can tell them to get in touch with you more and give you some good advices to be familiar with the new home.
Lastly, I want to inform you that I intend to spend my whole summer vacation catching up with you. Be patient until I visit you.
Well, that’s all for now. I have to get on with my study now. Give my love to you and your parents. When you have a moment, drop me a line and tell me when you have spare time to show me around this metropolis city. See you soon.
Best,
Trung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Clare, How’s it going? I hope you are well. It’...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun entertainment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much entertainment', 'a good deal of entertainment'.
Suggestion: much entertainment; a good deal of entertainment
...scribe what this city has? Does it have many entertainment center for children, or breathtaking vi...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is metropolis city. See you soon. Best, Trung
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Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...polis city. See you soon. Best, Trung
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, lastly, may, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 32.9175257732 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29166666667 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12988001749 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3744147902 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.8181818182 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9090909091 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31818181818 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141742426412 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497284699488 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465318412442 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863761748256 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447204168831 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.2 8.37731958763 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.42 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.97 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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