When new towns are planned, it is more important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently，there have been increasing number of new towns that are built with numbers of shopping centers. Therefore，it is said that building more public parks or sports facilities is more significant rather than building shopping centers for entertainment. Although the construction of parks and sports facilities plays great role in improving the health of people， I still believe that it is necessary to build some shopping malls to kill people’s time.
With varieties of parks and sports facilities built，people who usually go out will go to these areas frequently. This means people will have more opportunities to do more sports there，which helps them to keep fit. However，there are still a large number of places for people to improve their health, such as gym, where there are also many sports facilities and some professional coach to help you exercising scientifically.
Moreover，building shopping centers can increase the development of economic. Being attracted by all types of goods with good qualities and cheap price，more and more people，even the people who come from outside of the city will buy commodities there，causing significant growth in economic. In addition，when people spend their time in shopping malls， they will feel delightful and release their pressure. For example，there must be some entertainment areas such as theaters and game centers，which create a lot of fun especially for those people in a bad mood.
In conclusion，it is true that building parks and sports facilities can make people fit，but I tend to argue that it is a good idea to construct more shopping malls in new cities.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...em to keep fit. However，there are still a large number of places for people to improve their heal...
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Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to exercise' or 'exercise'.
Suggestion: to exercise; exercise
...and some professional coach to help you exercising scientifically. Moreover，building shop...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct more shopping malls in new cities.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49803921569 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47163161451 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1304295333 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432895738151 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167213506263 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091778144055 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271546044394 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669866325257 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...em to keep fit. However，there are still a large number of places for people to improve their heal...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to exercise' or 'exercise'.
Suggestion: to exercise; exercise
...and some professional coach to help you exercising scientifically. Moreover，building shop...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct more shopping malls in new cities.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49803921569 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47163161451 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1304295333 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432895738151 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167213506263 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091778144055 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271546044394 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669866325257 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.