These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying in a foreign country
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words
In recent years, there has been a growing concern about whether students should or should not study in a foreign country. However, everything has its own merits and demerits. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of why students choose to study abroad and some of the challenges they have to overcome.
At the outset, it is crucial to recognise that there are plenty of merits of studying abroad. One of the main positives of heading overseas is that it provides a unique opportunity to immerse oneself in a new culture.This allows them to have a better understanding of other cultures, and develop cross-culture which are highly developed by employers in today’s globalized world. Another advantage is that studying in a foreign country where the language is different from one’s native language can help improve language skills. By talking with native speakers, students are able to be provided a great opportunity to completely immerse themselves in a new language. There are plenty ways to learn a language but it’s often said that the best way to learn a language is to surround yourself with it
On the other hand it is essential to acknowledge the opposing viewpoints. One of the biggest drawbacks of studying abroad is financial burden. Studying in a foreign country means that students have to spend a great deal of money on flight tickets, renting accommodation, tuition and so on. This can result in a huge financial burden not just on themselves but also on their families too. As students have to do work to earn more money and pay for living expenses as opposed to focusing on their studies.
In summary, studying overseas, with its pros and cons, can have a double-edged effect on our lives. From my standpoint, I believe that experience gained from studying in other countries is desirable for international students and they’re also gaining proficiency in another language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07523510972 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89188648446 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8344269618 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168217015269 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564781167926 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423104504116 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102092233998 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333930345436 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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