Thanks to low cost airlines many people can travel abroad Is it a positive or negative development

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Thanks to low-cost airlines, many people can travel abroad. Is it a positive or negative development?

Many people can travel to the overseas country due to affordable airlines. In my opinion, this situation represents a positive development to visitors and society
There are several benefits of paying a visit abroad with a low cost. One advantage could be that as for tourism, low travel costs or discount tickets will draw many passengers’ attention because cheap fare will help them to save money to spend on other needs like food, accommodation, entertainment service. As a result, airline companies will have extra income and profits.
Another benefit worth mentioning is that in terms of the advantage of travellers, they have a opportunity to experience with cultural identity like customs, traditions and this can broaden their knowledge. Therefore, they can get a deeper insight into foreign culture, both of which can result in fewer conflicts caused by cultural differences. Furthermore, tourists can find a potential market when they travel to another country. Afterthat, they are likely to learn new things from foreign country and adopt to domestic market in order to develop in many ways like business, music
In conclusion, due to the above reasons, i strongly believe that this phenomenon is a positive development.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the advantage of travellers, they have a opportunity to experience with cultural...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...arn new things from foreign country and adopt to domestic market in order to develop in ...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evelop in many ways like business, music In conclusion, due to the above reasons,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, as for, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32142857143 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90281911404 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9414371154 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.375 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286893732352 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113620794055 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704023217103 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152087505607 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794726776071 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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