In some countries, people spend long hours at work.
Why does this happen?
and is it positive or negative development?
Nowadays people have to work extra hours in some countries. This essay will show why this happens and why it is a negative phenomenon.
To begin with, the most obvious reason why people spend a lot of time at work is because they have to have enough money for themselves. This is especially true in developing countries like Vietnam or China where many young adults, who are from poor families, need to work overtime to pay for their living expenses. Therefore, if they do not try hard to earn as much money as they can, they will experience many financial problems, such as debts, and also become a burden for their family. As a result, many young people today are under great financial pressure to sustain themselves, especially at the early stages of their career.
Admittedly, while working long hours can help a person earn more money, it also has some negative impacts on their life. This is because working over long periods of time without enough rest could lead to a lot of stress, and stress is the main cause of different problems in life. For example, when people feel stressed out, they tend to get angry easily which can be harmful to their relationships. Moreover, anger can make people act violently, which is also very detrimental to their career. Thus, it is important to be careful with your health and not to work overtime a lot.
In conclusion, one of the main reasons for people to invest a lot of time into work is covering their living costs. However, although it is necessary to have money for personal needs, people also need to know when to work less to protect their relationships and career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70629370629 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44836150464 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4303664219 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28133873081 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106486609023 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809118493163 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197329929277 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115771912455 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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