The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The chart shows us a classification of people who visited social media web-sites in Jamestown in 2018 by age.
From the first look, we can recognize that most of the social media users in 2018 in Jamestown were under 25-year old, while people who were over 55-year old rarely used social media.
Firstly, in 2018, two-fifths of social media patrons in Jamestown were from the teenagers tell 25-year old, moreover, the individuals who were between the ages of 26-year and under 35-year came in the second place for the most browsed social media for the same year by nearly a little above the third in total.
On the other hand, who were senior citizens in that time were not so familiar with social media sites, because just around 2% of users who logged in social media was from them, in addition, the mid-agers who were above35-year old and under 55-year old usually visited social media by a little-bit under a third of users.
- Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth Some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues Discuss both sides and give your opinion 11
- Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways What is your opinion 56
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 78
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 84
- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well managed What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world Do you think that the benefit 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, third, while, in addition, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75460122699 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31481099806 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5282440806 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.75 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.75 22.9334400587 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 28.25 5.23603664747 540% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170935923695 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141269504228 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456570433797 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141269504228 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456570433797 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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