Some people have the idea that in every successful person's lives, luck will always play a vital part. In my perspective, I completely disagree with the statement.
I believe that people create their own luck and fortune by doing the right things. Luck doesn't come by it's own but it's the result of what you have done by far. Fortune will always be in your hand if you always move forward and keep grinding hard. If you only do the right things , good things will come eventually which often got mistaken with luck. A case in point of this is the successful story of the KFC owner, he got rejected more than 200 times by all the investors but he did not gave up at all which all paid off at the end of the day.
However, there are still some people who become successful through pure luck and without talent or hardworking. Some people could easily win a ton of money through lottery tickets or by inherit their parents wealth. People often see this kind of luck through social media which create a misconception in people head. But what people don't realize is that those lucky people are extreme rare and most of the time hardworking and determination will take you to your dream places.
In conclusion, although some individuals use their fortune to achieve things, but most of the times it is people's diligent and sacrifice that obtain the great things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...fortune by doing the right things. Luck doesnt come by its own but its the result of w...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...things. Luck doesnt come by its own but its the result of what you have done by far...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng hard. If you only do the right things , good things will come eventually which ...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...mes by all the investors but he did not gave up at all which all paid off at the end...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ception in people head. But what people dont realize is that those lucky people are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58436213992 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34047613547 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588477366255 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5904421097 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199254222588 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747193247733 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302669165883 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11363403034 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025752873747 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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