Nowadays both men and women spend much money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results?
In this modern era, more and more male and female expend a lot of dollars to personal care products than some decades ago. There are several causes and considerable effects that I will elaborate more below.
Regarding the causes, current employees, particularly men, carry out various treatments because each job demands them to meet beauty standards. At an earlier time, appearance and facial beauty were the last requirements in some fields which those becomes paramount in professions such as steward and male beautician. Furthermore, in favour of the reduction of fine line and wrinkles, women aged over 40 have a strong desire to be ageless and crave on compliments in public. Noticeably, South Koreans are willing to spend big-budget around $700 a month to purchase the best anti-aging products (SK II and Estee Lauder).
Turning to the effects, hampering modern society notches up prospect career in expressing more both their self-complacency and creativity. Mostly men are better of being self-concept with sideburn and longhairs. Sadly, this would hinder their career rocketing, even seizing greater opportunities. In addition, the use of chemical cosmetic in long term brings about not only detrimental skins but also environmental issues. One of the dangerous ingredients is Pareben as artificial preservatives in cosmetic and body care products. Consultant dermatologist, Dr Ophelia Veraitch, states that those could potentially lead to cancer formation and harm to marine life believed to damage and kill coral.
In conclusion, the causes of excessive expenses to beauty treatments both sexes rather than few years ago are the significant job requirements as well as the flawless skin achievement. Meanwhile, the knock-on effects include hindering individuals’ future career and inflicting both citizen’s serious health issues and ecosystem disruption.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6161971831 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06953404899 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714788732394 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6922597542 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136955384924 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388501325645 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240686111743 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722246426718 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00327743594518 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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