Nowadays both men and women spend much money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results?
It is believed that genders (males and females) expend a lot of dollars to personal care products these days rather than few years ago. There are several causes and considerable effects of this phenomenon which I elaborate more below.
Regarding the causes, to meet beauty standard, current employees, particularly men, carry out various skin treatments for ones’ career prospect. Compared to decades ago, today’s appearance and facial beauty are the paramount requirements to apply for professions, such as steward and male beautician. Furthermore, modern society has been aware of not only maintaining healthier body, but also choosing proper consumption for healthy skin. During post-COVID-19 era, approximately 55% Dutch population, the changes of eating habits along with physical and mental positivity have brought the better lifestyle.
Turning to the effects, the long-term use of chemical cosmetics can endanger the environment (marine ecosystem) through waste-water which ends up in the ocean. Proved by the US researchers who found Paraben - one of an artificial preservative of cosmetic ingredients - in the tissue of dolphins and sea otters. In addition, in favour of reducing fine line and wrinkles, women aged over 40 can develop gerascophobia, fear of ageing, because of eagerly restoring youthful skin by splashing out money on skincare trends . Noticeably, South Koreans are willing to spend big-budget around $700 a month to purchase the best anti-aging products (SK II and Estee Lauder).
In conclusion, the causes of lavish spending on beauty treatments both sexes nowadays are following recent job qualifications and the attentiveness of healthy body image. Meanwhile, the adverse effects include biodiversity changes as well as the fear of getting old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60966542751 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03775042754 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.754646840149 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1331950798 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110278202505 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337499296363 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426815212812 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064174687815 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312306128184 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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