Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?
The number of male and female students in every university department should be equal. I partially agree to some extent of this view which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, accepting college students based on their gender with equally number could limit chance of new students to enroll on their interest subject . To illustrate, engineering faculties in Indonesia are dominated by men while women might not take consideration this field to venture their future career. Furthermore, student admission should depend on the result of test requirements. Strict testing system is meant to get promising prospective students as they will take active role in country’s development. In other words, individual’s capability, rather than gender, needs come first to get qualified generation.
Conversely, I believe that this issue probably impacts on improving analytical and communication skills. Considering the different brain structure of opposite gender which affects the way of thinking, this will enrich their insight in terms of solving problem and building relationship. In addition, this issue is more likely to promote fair competition. Nowadays, more and more female play a key role in job position which have stigma belonging for male in the past. Exploring same areas of research and social during academic life apparently brings opportunities for women to actively contribute to their family, society and even country.
In conclusion, it seems to me that giving same number of students based on sexes brings improvement on analytics and communication skills as well as hindering discrimination. This is provided that both genders can past the requirement test.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ents to enroll on their interest subject . To illustrate, engineering faculties in...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs come" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'come' or 'to be come'.
Suggestion: come; to be come
...s capability, rather than gender, needs come first to get qualified generation. C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57692307692 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0382151279 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669230769231 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9882897123 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145666887395 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527576792775 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1092817857 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104332377318 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106206216439 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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