Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, universities should select the proportions of men and women students equally in every subject. I strongly disagree with this opinion because it's impractical and unfair for students.
The primary reason why I believe having the equal numbers of two genders in each subject is hard to carry out in practice in many universities. In case the university wants to have those balanced proportions, they need enough applications of 2 genders to set an equal number of male and female. However, some major would be more popular with one gender than the other and it would be impossible to aim for equal data. Take the nurse profession as an example. That job is usually more common with women compared to men and the evidence is in most hospitals the number of nurses is almost women.
Another reason for my belief is that it would be unfair for many talented students if universities’ choice was based on candidates’ gender. Some students are good at particular fields but universities just have enough applications of that gender in their gender so those talented people don’t have the opportunity to enroll in their dream college. As a consequence, those universities are easily missing out on many gifted students. Moreover, in some cases, the total of students in each course would dramatically decrease due to the impractical criteria of admitting equal male and female and universities would run out of business.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the university should admit students based on their qualifications not on gender to have the same opportunity for every person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10305343511 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90801874883 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4694493428 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200939334131 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793524215351 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693412014105 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137864471901 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04368640363 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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