Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school

In this day and age , classmates influence to child more than their parents due to understanding encouragement and motivations .
First of all , classmates are understandable partners . It is likely that they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend to work on the problem that they are facing with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers , they can have some sensitive secrets that they don't want to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their friends soft skills which helps themselves deal with some certain situation .
On the other hand , it is true that parents play a important role in children success due to their financial support and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer students opportunities to study in the best learning environment . Needless to say , universities require tuition fees that is paid by parents to provide students with adequate facilities before students going to school . In this way , children will have a chance to gain experience and knowledge from attending school . What is more , parents can give children encouragement and motivation to have good performance at school . It is a common sight that many parents are aware of the importance of education and set expectation foe children 's accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close connection between parents and children by helping with doing assignments or engaging in discussion about school topics .
In conclusion , it is clearly undoubtable that the role of classmates and parents have a positive effect on children at school . However , children should take learning
the best of the parents and friends into consideration .

Votes
Average: 6.1 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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In this day and age , classmates influence to child more than...
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...erstanding encouragement and motivations . First of all , classmates are unders...
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...gement and motivations . First of all , classmates are understandable partners ...
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..., classmates are understandable partners . It is likely that they know each other ...
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...likely that they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend...
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... they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend to work on...
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...on the problem that they are facing with in order to solve it an easy way , for ...
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...g with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers ,...
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...n have some sensitive secrets that they dont want to talk with their parents . Howev...
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...hey dont want to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with t...
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...ant to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with their class...
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... feel free to talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their fr...
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Suggestion: ,
...talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their friends soft ski...
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Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...mselves deal with some certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that ...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that parents play a importan...
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Suggestion: an
...her hand , it is true that parents play a important role in children success due ...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... financial support and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer stude...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rt and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer students opportunitie...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...o study in the best learning environment . Needless to say , universities require ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...t learning environment . Needless to say , universities require tuition fees that ...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...cilities before students going to school . In this way , children will have a chan...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e students going to school . In this way , children will have a chance to gain exp...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ence and knowledge from attending school . What is more , parents can give childre...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dge from attending school . What is more , parents can give children encouragement...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ation to have good performance at school . It is a common sight that many parents ...
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...foe children s accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close con...
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... accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close connection betwee...
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...gaging in discussion about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoub...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoubtable that the role...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a positive effect on children at school . However , children should take learning...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e effect on children at school . However , children should take learning the bes...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... However , children should take learning the best of the parents and friends into...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e parents and friends into consideration .
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22614840989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00306988588 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.646297107 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264953687436 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925509779092 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561377560835 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143366992794 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764046151299 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this day and age , classmates influence to child more than...
^^
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erstanding encouragement and motivations . First of all , classmates are unders...
^^
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gement and motivations . First of all , classmates are understandable partners ...
^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., classmates are understandable partners . It is likely that they know each other ...
^^
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...likely that they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend...
^^
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... they know each other through . Moreover , they can assist their friend to work on...
^^
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on the problem that they are facing with in order to solve it an easy way , for ...
^^
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers ,...
^^
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... with in order to solve it an easy way , for examples : As they are teenagers , ...
^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... , for examples : As they are teenagers , they can have some sensitive secrets th...
^^
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n have some sensitive secrets that they dont want to talk with their parents . Howev...
^^^^
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hey dont want to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with t...
^^
Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ant to talk with their parents . However , they feel free to talk with their class...
^^
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... feel free to talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their fr...
^^
Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...talk with their classmates . In addition , classmates teach their friends soft ski...
^^
Line 2, column 527, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mselves deal with some certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that ...
^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...certain situation . On the other hand , it is true that parents play a importan...
^^
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...her hand , it is true that parents play a important role in children success due ...
^
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... financial support and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer stude...
^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rt and psychological aid . To begin with , parents can offer students opportunitie...
^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o study in the best learning environment . Needless to say , universities require ...
^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t learning environment . Needless to say , universities require tuition fees that ...
^^
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cilities before students going to school . In this way , children will have a chan...
^^
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e students going to school . In this way , children will have a chance to gain exp...
^^
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ence and knowledge from attending school . What is more , parents can give childre...
^^
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dge from attending school . What is more , parents can give children encouragement...
^^
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ation to have good performance at school . It is a common sight that many parents ...
^^
Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...foe children s accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close con...
^^
Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... accomplishments at school . In this way , there will be a close connection betwee...
^^
Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gaging in discussion about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoub...
^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n about school topics . In conclusion , it is clearly undoubtable that the role...
^^
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... a positive effect on children at school . However , children should take learning...
^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e effect on children at school . However , children should take learning the bes...
^^
Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... However , children should take learning the best of the parents and friends into...
^^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e parents and friends into consideration .
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22614840989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00306988588 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.646297107 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264953687436 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925509779092 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561377560835 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143366992794 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764046151299 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.