Because of your job, you have to move to a new city. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter
ask them to help you find somewhere to live
tell them the kind of accommodation you want to find
tell them which area of the city you want to live in
Dear Jenny,
How are you doing? It has been a long time since we last met. I'm writing to let you know that I will be moving to your city next month.
I'm very excited and can't believe that we will be able to meet soon. Since you're the only friend I have there, I was wondering if you could help me to find a place to live.
I'm looking for a two-bedroom apartment that is fully furnished. It would be ideal if it also includes free parking spot. My budget for rent will be around $500 - 1000 per month, excluding any additional facility fees.
Considering my office is located in the city center, I'd prefer to live somewhere within a distance of 5 - 10km. If possible, I'd like to find a place in a neighbourhood with a commercial complex, so that I can easily go shopping or watch movies after work.
Please call me if you come across any suitable apartments. Once I have settled down, please come over for a drink or meal anytime.
Warm Regards,
Hoa Ng
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jenny, How are you doing? It has been a long ti...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...has been a long time since we last met. Im writing to let you know that I will be ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... be moving to your city next month. Im very excited and cant believe that we w...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ity next month. Im very excited and cant believe that we will be able to meet so...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...hat we will be able to meet soon. Since youre the only friend I have there, I was won...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...ave there, I was wondering if you could help me to find a place to live. Im looking for a tw...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...uld help me to find a place to live. Im looking for a two-bedroom apartment tha...
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Line 8, column 54, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...y office is located in the city center, Id prefer to live somewhere within a dista...
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Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...ffice is located in the city center, Id prefer to live somewhere within a distance of ...
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Line 8, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...in a distance of 5 - 10km. If possible, Id like to find a place in a neighbourhood...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37777777778 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41975426921 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711111111111 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2394884479 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6153846154 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214049168039 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688155990922 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916799122342 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116661267515 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879194766887 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.