Some people think that shopping online has more benefits than drawbacks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this day and age, it is a fact that purchasing things via online platforms has become a trend on a global scale, especially for young adults. Some people think such phenomenon has numerous benefits, which outweigh the drawbacks. Personally, I totally agree with the previous statement for some reasons, which will be proved in the following essay.
To commence with, people can save time when they buy things on the Internet. To be more specific, when they go online shopping, they just need some simple technological appliances and do the whole process at home, which will be more time-saving than going to the physical shop. If a person goes to a store, for instance, he will have to spend time not only moving to the destination but also being in a queue to wait for payment. Consequently, a great amount of time is saved, which can be used for other essential purposes like sleeping or working.
In addition, online shoppers are able to save more money. Selling things through online platforms, to be more precise, means that the employers do not need to pay for employee’s salary, venue cost and other fees needed for physical stores. As a consequence, the costs for the products are usually lower and more affordable for consumers. Moreover, some shopping websites such as Shopee or Lazada have promotions monthly, which assist buyers to own a product with a bargain price.
In conclusion, online shopping is so beneficial for not only the consumers but also the sellers that it should be more popular in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65555110556 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7624384561 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198968684104 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773541479244 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455757144648 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127100640455 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233179448663 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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