The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted Increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
As the argument is stating that the news channels are Lossing their views and getting complains regarding the time increased for national news and not about the local news and whether forecast, as this time must have been devoted for national news to those people who come from their work and get the national updates through news channel. And the complains which the business manager must be receiving must be from just little amount of the old citizen generations.
As the old citizens who are not much concerned about the national updates and news, they are just curious about the local news and whether news as they maybe not having enough knowledge about whole India. But what about the remaining generation who are interested in knowing the updates of the whole national and want to keep them selves updated with the national news also,
And the author has not mentioned the number here of the complains getting registered has there maybe only 10% to 15% people complaining about it and must be complaining repeatedly, so the author can not just conclude on those few percent of people.
And regarding the advertising revenues which are canceling their contracts , maybe they are getting recognized more on different social media platform and getting more reviews and revenues from there as more of the young generation people now days are getting influenced by the social media platforms. The local news also which have canceled their late night shows also maybe because the maximum number of their viewers maybe in the day time and maybe they must be publishing their news in day time, for their views to maximize. And now days the news updates and whether updates are also found on internet everywhere, because of internet it is become more easier and handy for the viewers to get their updates in seconds rather than waiting for the whole day for the news to telecast on given time. So because of this reason also the viewers may have dropped.
Hence after these analyses we can say that author have not researched more in depth and only based on flaws the conclusions are being made, which can be avoided by more research and surveys which can be taken place
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 373 350
No. of Characters: 1774 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.395 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.756 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.241 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 41.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.212 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.442 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.442 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itizen generations. As the old citizens who are not much concerned about the nat...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
... of the whole national and want to keep them selves updated with the national news also, ...
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Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ves updated with the national news also, And the author has not mentioned the num...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntioned the number here of the complains getting registered has there maybe only ...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nues which are canceling their contracts , maybe they are getting recognized more...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acts , maybe they are getting recognized more on different social media platform ...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d getting more reviews and revenues from there as more of the young generation pe...
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Line 4, column 653, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...where, because of internet it is become more easier and handy for the viewers to get their ...
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Line 4, column 801, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for the news to telecast on given time. So because of this reason also the viewers may hav...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...son also the viewers may have dropped. Hence after these analyses we can say that au...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 373.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82573726542 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28441161308 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436997319035 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.8473053892 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.666666667 57.8364921388 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.0 119.503703932 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.4444444444 23.324526521 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.70786347227 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223123349652 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101853319018 0.0743258471296 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995238550354 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121776077642 0.128457276422 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116643095243 0.0628817314937 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 14.3799401198 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 12.197005988 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 12.3882235529 137% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.1389221557 165% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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