Over the past decades, there is an increasing trend in the cosmetic surgery to enhance their way of appearance. This has been crucial to many individuals to get more chances in film and fashion industry due to cut-throat competition. I believe this as a negative growth with concern of some consequences.
To begin with, due to heavy competition in the market, majority of people are involving in the plastic surgeries to appear more attractive than before. This surgery not only enhances their looks but also builds their confidence to compete with opponents in various industries. Although, it involves huge risk, it gives flawless beauty. For instance, most of the actress in the film industry rely on the plastic surgeries to grab more movies opportunities and make a wealthy profit. Thus, changing physical appearance by cosmetic surgeries is beneficial for some extent.
However, there are myriad reasons associated with negative growth. Firstly, it decreases the quality of skin and making it vulnerable to outer environment. That is to say, people who go through these surgeries are not exposed to sunlight and pollution. Moreover, making it difficult to consume limited varieties of food due to allergies. Secondly, undergoing these surgeries has multitude of threats, inevitably suffering from various health related issues. To illustrate, the legendary pop singer, Micheal Jackson had undergone multiple surgeries to improve his skin tone and to attract people for his concerts. Consequently, he faced many health issues after it. Therefore, depending on cosmetic surgeries to improve physical appearance is not ideal.
In conclusion, although, a number of people are relying on cosmetic surgeries for fame, it has major flaws which are detrimental to well-being of individuals. Thus, I believe that, people should encourage inner beauty more, rather than the outer beauty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ition in the market, majority of people are involving in the plastic surgeries to appear more...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...issues after it. Therefore, depending on cosmetic surgeries to improve physical a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46416382253 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88193276556 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6226555375 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9444444444 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213801704406 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639172272003 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602230167729 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125881049597 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215744343726 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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