The bar graph illustrates proportions of regular exercise of both Australian men and women of multiple age groups in the year 2010.
Overall, the percentage of doing physical activity by women are higher in majority of the age groups compared to men. That is to say, there is a downward trend in the male groups initially and then, a small rise by the older males. However, there is an upward trend in the females among all the age groups and sudden decrease by aged females.
In the male age groups, 15 to 24 was the group with highest percentage of 52.8% and the 35 to 44 males group was the lowest one with 39.5% participating in the regular physical activity. While, the percentage of the groups 25 to 34, 45 to 54 and 65 and over are with almost equal proportion of 42.2, 43.1 and 46.7 respectively.
However, in the female groups, three middle aged groups are having almost half of the population involving in regular physical exercises and the female groups, 15 to 24 and 35 to 44 have approximately half of the population and the group 65 and over percentage is almost similar to males group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...male age groups, 15 to 24 was the group with highest percentage of 52.8% and the 35 to 44 ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, while, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61616161616 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59476056104 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489898989899 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3081876877 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321905537094 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166465861833 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111666020728 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217131830962 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804420450488 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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