the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, it is generally believed that abandon advertising will be more advantages mainly because it is not helpful for people and can damage to them. Personally, I totally disagree with this statement.
For a variety reason, in modern era, as technology has advanced in leads and bounds, information thought by images or video more and more become popular for daily of people. Moreover, advertising give the information which will be consumed by the observe of people and help them to widen their knowledge about some products. it very suitable and convenient for some people who have a hectic lifestyle. For example, people who have all day within working, will no longer to access the internet or go to the shop to learn about products. So, advertisement will show some basic about function of machine. Then, they can know more the information. In addition to this, advertisement bring news to people which will help people can walk and see the necessary things to them.
Apart from the abovementioned concerns, some advertises not have any damage to people. This is simply because, nowadays, companies and factories who just want introduce their goods to consumers. So they usually show the benefits of their products, pay their attention. After that, people can know their products and buy these products. Smartphone as a example. Steve Job who is CEO of Apple, he usually introduce for people about new basic function of new phone every year though by advertises, such as in social networking. Furthermore, government usually encourage hospital introduce their medicine, the drawback of many diseases though by advertises and tell them should go to the hospital once a year.
Taking everything into consideration, it is reinforces my perspective that advertising more and more become a important tools which very convenient and necessary for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e information which will be consumed by the observe of people and help them to widen their ...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...en their knowledge about some products. it very suitable and convenient for some p...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s and buy these products. Smartphone as a example. Steve Job who is CEO of Apple,...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'introduces'.
Suggestion: introduces
...eve Job who is CEO of Apple, he usually introduce for people about new basic function of ...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e that advertising more and more become a important tools which very convenient a...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tool'?
Suggestion: tool
...tising more and more become a important tools which very convenient and necessary for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23509933775 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86000145988 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7745542897 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111894269174 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400987222108 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040047613492 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783301939644 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480495916666 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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