You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Some people consider that flourishing countries should help all needy people in impoverished ones by other ways rather than giving them financial aid. While this ideal is a worthy aim, i believe that it is pratical for governments to implement many ways including giving financial aid to assist poorer countries.
On the one hand, providing undeveloped countries with money can help them to overcome their economic obstacles, therefore, they can become stronger. When nations with better condition help other countries which are in economic crisis by giving them financial aid, that would definitely be helpful to them. For instance, with the financial help from Russia, Vietnam was able to surpass their dark economic condition. By receiving money from richer countries, Vietnam also had the capability to develop their education and medical infrastructures.
On the other hand, apart from assisting impoverished countries by giving them money, developed countries can apply policies to encourage residents to establish international organizations or launch campaigns in order to help the poorer countries. Through these organizations and campains, the richer can help the poorer with more understanding about their situations. The more people participate in voluntary activities, the more poorer can be helped. Like the Red Cross, with their enormous assistance, many children were helped to cross their hard conditions and become better.
In conclusion, while developed countries can help the impoverished ones by giving the financial aid, i believe that they can also assist other countries by motivating organizing voluntary activities such as campaigns or other actions to directly visit poorer countries and help them.
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent d 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67307692308 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91601119713 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2313697339 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323259490695 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132622569574 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107764052168 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235463780309 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632679117479 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.