The reading and article are about the preservation of the declining Torrey Taxifolia tree. While the author argues and gives three ways in which the trees can be preserved, the lecturer disputes the claims presented in the article. She states that all of the measures stated are fallacious.
According the article the Torrey Taxifolia thrives in a microclimate of the forests of Florida. The author states that by reestablishing and replanting the trees in dampest and coolest part of the microclimate is a possible solution. The lecturer challenges the argument. She states that the microclimate areas have been affected by the larger outer areas of the forest. The increasing global warming, draining of wetlands and drying of regions have caused detrimental effects on the areas in which the trees thrive.
The reading gives another solution of moving the Torreya trees to an new alternative location. The article suggest that moving the Torrey trees to further north can help them survive. However, the lecturer assets that moving trees to new location leads to an unpredicted and undesirable outcome. She states when Black Locust trees were moved to an new location, the trees grew rapidly and outran the other tree species which were endangered to.
The author puts forth the idea that Torrey trees can be preserved in an monitored environment in a research center. In contrast, the lecturer stance is that the tree species cannot survive the diseases outbreak in a lab. The trees in research centres are limited and not diverse hence decreasing the chances of their survival.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...esented in the article. She states that all of the measures stated are fallacious. Acc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...solution of moving the Torreya trees to an new alternative location. The article s...
^^
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a trees to an new alternative location. The article suggest that moving the Torrey ...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...n new alternative location. The article suggest that moving the Torrey trees to further...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s when Black Locust trees were moved to an new location, the trees grew rapidly an...
^^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...a that Torrey trees can be preserved in an monitored environment in a research cen...
^^
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'diseases'' or 'disease's'?
Suggestion: diseases'; disease's
...hat the tree species cannot survive the diseases outbreak in a lab. The trees in researc...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17054263566 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66038334924 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9391976438 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06452816374 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129114831548 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474216017975 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027747392308 0.0662205650399 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799486629767 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149006141851 0.0443174109184 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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