Teaching is the process of imparting correct knowledge to someone. The term “actions” in the prompt means the behavior of humankind, nothing more than that. The positive and negative are like a coin having two faces. The prompt states that ‘the best way to teach is to proclaim positive things and ignore negative ones’. This is a good way to teach to anyone but not the best way. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the first part and disagree with the second part of this given statement for the following three reasons.
To begin, Reward is the best way to teach, which may be either tangible or non-tangible (verbal). Utilizing this method of teaching, and reinforcing the positive behavior of students so they are likely to repeat these manners again and again which helps personal growth. For illustration, a learner who eagerly completed the assignments on time. If the tutor gives positive feedback and even support with good suggestions then student thinks that it is a good way to learn and are likely to repeat it in upcoming assignments and other learning strategy. Ultimately, students are able to improve their learning abilities. In contrast, for example, if a male student whose behavior is not as good as with a female one in the sense of accusing, then it is a very serious situation for the teacher and the student himself. In this case, what should we do? There will be three actions, either punishment, give a positive suggestion, or ignore it. Ignore is a shameless idea while punishment is a bad one, either verbally or physically. It builds the student, rude, relentless, imprudent, stubborn, and even evil. So the best way is, to understand the behavior of the student, why is he doing such a bad thing, and try to alleviate his negative character by giving a positive view. Hence, the above examples emphasize that the best way to teach is to praise for positives as well as treat for negative ones.
Moreover, Children are the future stars of the next generations of the nations and parents are the first teachers. In the same manner, home is the first school of these infants. Parents have an important role in bringing the character of their child, either positive or negative. For example, a child is playing football with his friends and is seeking by his parents. Meanwhile, a juvenile passed the ball to his friend and did the goal by his teammate. If parents give verbal praise to this child and encourage him, that helps to build a positive attitude in his mind and try to recap it again. In the contrary, if these children fight each other during this football match, the thing is serious and parents have to assuage this situation with a proper panacea rather this ignoring it. The above example proves that whatever situation either positive or negative, might be coming, we have to make it better rather than ignore it.
Finally, Politics is a set and group of people whose main ambition is to make the motto and give decisions in their group. Politicians are the persons who are involved in politics while the leader is the main person of this politics. Society is the best school for the youth. For Example, In India, a number of sex scandal, human trafficking, and even rape case has been happening over the past several decades. This has been rendered as a deep-rooted human behavior in India. Several reformers, leaders, and public speakers are trying to speak about these calamities. So many NGOs and INGOs are trying to alleviate it, but they are not able to get good results. So now the government is trying to pass a defended bill for this disastrous phenomenon. So the above illustration gist that, in the worst case scenarios, we can’t ignore it, and can’t even give a positive suggestion. Punishment is the ultimate solution.
In conclusion, the correct way to teach is to admire positive behavior and mitigate the negative ones rather than ignore it.
- An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces A study reports that in nearby East Meria where fish consumption is very high people visit the doctor only once or twice per 62
- We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes 50
- Critical judgement of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in the field 66
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones 58
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement a 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3246.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 674.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81602373887 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0952438579 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59460723843 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46587537092 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1018.8 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.579721328 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7297297297 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2162162162 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89189189189 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335751550068 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797716330277 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12225521429 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235827768363 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14859309986 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 100.480337079 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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