Expertise is the tool that helps the valued judgment in a particular field. Perfection is directly proportional to proficiency. According to the prompt, Critical judgment of any work in any given field is pointless whenever it comes from an expert in that particular field. In my view, I mostly agree with this statement for the following two reasons.
To begin, critical judgment is an opinion or a decision based on pieces of evidence, thoughts, feelings, and reality. Expert is the way that gives strong and real results for a particular field. For illustration, whenever we build commercial or residential buildings, roads, bridges etc., we hire a civil engineer for the critical evaluation, even an engineer from a diverse field of civil, like structural, geotechnical, environmental, etc. We think that a layman cannot design that huge structure even judge. Even though, a group of skilled and unskilled manpower can construct but with the help of an engineer. Additionally, for medical field, we need a expert medical person and one another best example that, curriculum based subjects like Science, Art, Management, etc. One science teacher can not judge the art student and one art teacher cannot judge the management student. Hence, for valued judgement, we need relative knowledge.
Furthermore, in every work, there has to hire relative proficiency. For example, in American got talent and American Idol, the organizer appoints judges from related fields. Like a singer for a singing competition and a choreographer for dancing. The real thing is that, for the judgment, the organizer hires an expert from a diverse field. Similarly, another brief examples are, only cricket expert can judge cricketing, and a football expert can judge football. Even though a normal human can know superficially but for the particular critical evaluation, we need experts. Therefore, to hold ground on the related field, an adept person is necessary for the critical judgement.
However, I do concede that no one is 100% perfect in any comparative fields. Perfection comes from experiences. In the beginning, everyone is a learner and by practicing, became an expert in the future in any diverse field. For instance, NASA scientists are working continuing their work. They fail 100 times and finally get the result. They failed so many times during the experiments of spacecraft. Similarly, another example is the movie review. Many film critics are reviewing the movie and try to change the perspective of the ordinary public but today, every human beings are perfect for taking movie reviews. They are using social media, and YouTube channels and trying to judge the movie before watching. Thus, from the above example, we can conclude that experts always cannot solve the problems and always don’t need experts.
Hence, for any particular task, Experts are necessary. Critical judgment is meaningless unless this judgment is not done by an expert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dditionally, for medical field, we need a expert medical person and one another b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, similarly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2486.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27813163482 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82727622165 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513800424628 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7875471785 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1935483871 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1935483871 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83870967742 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2787270111 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770634884837 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750593616718 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19608491579 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789433580845 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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