Extreme sports such as rock climbing, skydiving are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is believed that adventurous sports such as sky diving or rock climbing are full of risks and would better be prohibited. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view because extreme sports bring various benefits to individuals and country growth.
In society today, dangerous sports are becoming increasingly popular; however, there is also potential for physical risks, including injury, accidents, or even fatalities. People who take part in extreme sports are always willing to face dangers that happen accidentally, like adverse weather conditions and improper equipment. Therefore, people need to be trained with the necessary skills in extreme sports and be cautious about safety equipment before participating to minimize the risks and ensure their safety.
However, I would argue that extreme sports should be maintained and developed. Adventurous sports should not be banned because players constantly have to face several challenges to break their limits and personal growth from discovering new capabilities. They will become more confident and independent, leading to success. Besides, extreme sports can be considered as a type of entertainment that helps individuals relax and unwind after a long working day. Another reason is that dangerous sports attract millions of tourists combined with outbound and inbound every year that is a great way to enhance economic growth.
In conclusion, from my perspective, although there are a lot of potential dangers of extreme sports; however, the government should not ban them due to the development of individuals and society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...elieved that adventurous sports such as sky diving or rock climbing are full of risks and ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57613168724 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89749927363 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7265446158 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31918263548 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112804885314 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564791107372 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187733212723 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624370015205 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...elieved that adventurous sports such as sky diving or rock climbing are full of risks and ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57613168724 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89749927363 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7265446158 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31918263548 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112804885314 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564791107372 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187733212723 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624370015205 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.