The following is a memorandum from the business manager of WLSS television station.
“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.”
In the given arguemnt , the author states that the time devoted to weather and local news should be restored to its former level . The author has not has not taken into consideration the several factors that might lead to a decrease in the advertising revenue .The author has not provided any statistical data whether the number of people watching the television has decreased or not . This can be a very helpful data to know whether there is a decline in the number of people watching televsion or not . For example , the audiance may have stopped watching television and might have swichted to other streaming platforms like YouTube which might be a reson that the number of people watching television has decreased and thus the advertising companies have chossen these platforms to advertise other than the television leading to a cancellations in advertising contracts .
Additionally , what type of complaints have the vieweres reported to the television station is not specifically mentioned . These complaints might inculde various topics like the quality of the content. These may not be necessarliy be toward the time of the coverage thus on basis of the maximum complaints recevied that are not categorized on basis of the cause the television station manager should not take the decision to restore the time to its former level without deep investigating the actcual cause of the issues .Additionally , the author has assumed that since the televison station is showing less local news the local bussiness have stopped adversiting with the televison station . The actual situation might be different . The local bussiness might have suffered losses because of which they have cut down the advertising expenses . Thus cancelling the contracts . This factor must also be considered when the television station manager decides to restore the timeIn conculsion , The argument give fails to explain the resons why the television sation manager must restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level
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- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of WLSS television station Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news During the same 50
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 21 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 323 350
No. of Characters: 1671 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.239 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.173 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.711 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.305 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In the given arguemnt , the author states that the time devoted...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s should be restored to its former level . The author has not has not taken into c...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'has not'.
Suggestion: has not
...stored to its former level . The author has not has not taken into consideration the several fa...
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Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to a decrease in the advertising revenue .The author has not provided any statisti...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... a decrease in the advertising revenue .The author has not provided any statistical...
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Suggestion: .
...hing the television has decreased or not . This can be a very helpful data to know...
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...mber of people watching televsion or not . For example , the audiance may have sto...
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Suggestion: ,
... watching televsion or not . For example , the audiance may have stopped watching ...
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Line 1, column 833, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a cancellation' or simply 'cancellations'?
Suggestion: a cancellation; cancellations
...se other than the television leading to a cancellations in advertising contracts .Additionally ...
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Suggestion: .
...a cancellations in advertising contracts .Additionally , what type of complaints h...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...cancellations in advertising contracts .Additionally , what type of complaints have the view...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s in advertising contracts .Additionally , what type of complaints have the viewer...
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Suggestion: .
...on station is not specifically mentioned . These complaints might inculde various ...
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Line 1, column 1396, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...tigating the actcual cause of the issues .Additionally , the author has assumed th...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...gating the actcual cause of the issues .Additionally , the author has assumed that since the...
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Line 1, column 1410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ctcual cause of the issues .Additionally , the author has assumed that since the t...
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Line 1, column 1567, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d adversiting with the televison station . The actual situation might be different...
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Suggestion: .
... The actual situation might be different . The local bussiness might have suffered...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y have cut down the advertising expenses . Thus cancelling the contracts . This fa...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...expenses . Thus cancelling the contracts . This factor must also be considered whe...
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Line 1, column 1866, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...decides to restore the timeIn conculsion , The argument give fails to explain the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 323.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22600619195 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79445109388 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455108359133 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.209190918 57.8364921388 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.8 119.503703932 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3 23.324526521 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.25449101796 400% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169570216923 0.218282227539 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654544933635 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837535285753 0.0701772020484 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169570216923 0.128457276422 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.3799401198 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.3550499002 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.197005988 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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