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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...oing to affect the citizens for a short period of time in terms of inflation, the people knew ...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...were unsure if the new government favour her citizens or if they were just in for...
^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...ners, westerners and the easterners, it lead to a coup which ultimately led to the c...
^^^^
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...ltimately led to the civil war of 1964. hence cooperation should be encouraged rather...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...ltimately led to the civil war of 1964. hence cooperation should be encouraged rather...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13981042654 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09969364157 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476303317536 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.160541838 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.157894737 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32036347211 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958924248768 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683938623264 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183473008656 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747400695647 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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