: In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation
In recent years, it has become evident that young people in certain countries are experiencing increased wealth, improved health, and longer lifespans. Surprisingly, despite these favorable conditions, their level of happiness has declined. This essay will delve into the underlying causes of this phenomenon and propose potential solutions to address the situation.
There are several factors contributing to the decreased happiness among young people. Firstly, the rise of materialism and consumerism has led to a relentless pursuit of material possessions and societal status. This relentless pursuit creates a constant sense of dissatisfaction and prevents individuals from finding true happiness. Additionally, the influence of social media and digital platforms has created unrealistic expectations and comparisons, leading to feelings of inadequacy and unhappiness. The pressure to showcase a perfect life online has resulted in a lack of genuine connections and increased feelings of isolation.
To address this concerning issue, multiple strategies can be implemented. Firstly, it is crucial to promote a shift in societal values and place greater emphasis on experiences and relationships rather than material possessions. Educational institutions and families should prioritize teaching young people about the importance of gratitude, empathy, and mindfulness to cultivate a more positive outlook on life. Moreover, governments and relevant authorities should regulate the advertising industry to minimize the influence of materialistic messages on young minds. Implementing stricter regulations on advertisements targeting children and promoting responsible marketing practices can help mitigate the negative impact of consumerism on happiness.
Furthermore, investing in mental health support and well-being programs for young individuals is paramount. Schools and community centers should incorporate comprehensive mental health education and provide accessible counseling services. Encouraging physical activities, such as sports and outdoor recreation, can also enhance overall well-being and happiness. By promoting a healthy and active lifestyle, young people can develop resilience, build self-esteem, and form meaningful connections with peers.
In conclusion, despite the increased wealth, improved health, and longer lifespans of young people in some countries, their level of happiness has declined. This can be attributed to the negative effects of materialism, societal pressures, and the influence of digital media. To address this situation, it is crucial to shift societal values, regulate the advertising industry, and prioritize mental health and well-being. By implementing these measures, we can strive to create a happier and more fulfilling environment for the young generation.
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- In some countries young people have become richer healthier and live longer but they are less happy What are the causes What can be done to address this situation 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2437.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28092783505 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27545887353 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1006541604 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.047619048 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215124512195 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595528309835 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510511942978 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122214772402 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581529613982 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.14 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 156.0 78.4519038076 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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