"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A society is being the sum up of various kinds of people. Among them, the young persons are considered as the pioneer of the time of progress. Many sociology claims that very strongly with the evidence the new comer can make great change in the co-operation and achieving success for any nation. I think it is perfectly proved that from the youth we are able to see the future leader who will keep some graet impact in our social condition. But this process should be gained by the helping mentality to each other not the competitive way.
A good environment is mostly appreciated to inspire the people to become fit for the challenging and tough period of lifetime. The government should take care about the learning and teaching procedure which keeps more importance in the feasibility region for the young leaders. An abundant number of sociologist were corroborating the theory of working together for a purpose which comprehended the mechanism of the under age persons psychological aspects pursuasively. Without education and analytical decision making in the every steps of our youngers life, it becomes so hard to understand about the usefulness of strenght they can hold for the development of a nation.
Furthermore, a social contradiction is available in the pupils mind which patronize the older thoughts influencing the authority of any nation raising its popularity day by day. The historical movements of the anicent period portrays the potentiality and acknowledgement of the youth. In every strategical fight against the enemy of the history the new blood are always trying to uphold the flag of peace by their dedication and co-operative works towards the helpless.
At last, it is being more theoretically and abstractly clear that wiothout making ready our next genaration by the knowledge of modern science and trying a great difference between the time . The main duty of the authority should take in care for the further development of all
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...hat very strongly with the evidence the new comer can make great change in the co-operati...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciated inspiring'.
Suggestion: appreciated inspiring
...tive way. A good environment is mostly appreciated to inspire the people to become fit for the challe...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ying a great difference between the time . The main duty of the authority should t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10248447205 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93189017951 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61801242236 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.393517473 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155279868185 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479163325468 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395284229483 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785838623691 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492786170999 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.