The picture below shows how a balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The given diagram illustrates the structure and operational principles of a hot air balloon.
Overall, it is apparent that a hot air balloon consists of several key elements: the envelope, the burner, propane cylinder, the skirt, the basket. Moreover, the diagram distinctly reveals the operational process of a standard hot air balloon with the upward movement of heated air.
As can be seen in the process, the largest component of the hot air balloon, also referred to as the envelope, is a fusion of the multiple fabric strips known for gores. These gores are carefully crafted by connecting numerous nylon panels together, collectively shaping the balloon when fully inflated. On top of the balloon, there is a parachute valve that allows it to open and close the air like a self-sealing flap. Its primary role is to enable control and release the air when the balloon works.
At the base of the envelope lies the skirt, integrally reinforced with flame- resistant material to endure with the heat pressure releasing from the burner. The burner, affixed to a metal flame beneath the skirt and above the passenger basket, serves as an engine, proficiency mixing propane with oxygen to generate the l hot air for the balloon.
In terms of operation, the burners facilitate the introduction of hot air into the envelope. This heated air is lighter than the surrounding cold air, thus generating a buoyant force that elevates the entire structure, enabling the hot air balloon to fly in the sky.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.044 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71499834254 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4834371549 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.064400327966 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322307923129 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0164316735573 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430675526476 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193128775535 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.044 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71499834254 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4834371549 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.636363636 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.064400327966 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322307923129 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0164316735573 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430675526476 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193128775535 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.