The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Science plays a significant role in shaping our today society and our daily lives. From medical breakthroughs to technological advancements, science has helped us to live longer, healthier and more comfortable lives. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the most important aim of science is to improve people's lives.
Firstly, medical researches and discoveries have played an essential role in improving people's lives through scientific research, we have developed new drugs, vaccines and treatments, which have saved millions of lives. For example, the COVID-19 vaccine is a great example of how science has helped us to overcome a global pandemic,saving countless lives globally.
Secondly, technology has also changed our lives in many ways, making our daily tasks more accessible and efficient. From smartphones to the internet, technology has transformed communication, allowed access to information from anywhere . All these advancements have dramatically improved our lives by making time-consuming tasks easier and faster. However, it is also important to note that science should not only focus on improving the quality of life of normal but also for those who are less fortunate. Various programs aimed at bringing science to remote areas help created awareness about public health, agriculture,and other issues.These initiatives have helped to improve the living conditions , increase crop yields, and ensure that the benefits of science are accessible to all.
In conclusion, science has an essential role in transforming our world, and its most important aim should be to improve people's lives. While science has brought about hugh advancements, we must ensure that it benefits everyone and not just the fortunate few. Science has the power to shape our future for the better.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , saving
... helped us to overcome a global pandemic,saving countless lives globally. Secondly, t...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...owed access to information from anywhere . All these advancements have dramaticall...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...areness about public health, agriculture,and other issues.These initiatives have hel...
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Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...ic health, agriculture,and other issues.These initiatives have helped to improve the ...
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Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... helped to improve the living conditions , increase crop yields, and ensure that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54744525547 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03891998193 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8578076419 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245183042989 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977112440638 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993349588304 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163207664846 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537884514163 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , saving
... helped us to overcome a global pandemic,saving countless lives globally. Secondly, t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...owed access to information from anywhere . All these advancements have dramaticall...
^^
Line 3, column 622, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...areness about public health, agriculture,and other issues.These initiatives have hel...
^^^^
Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...ic health, agriculture,and other issues.These initiatives have helped to improve the ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... helped to improve the living conditions , increase crop yields, and ensure that t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54744525547 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03891998193 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8578076419 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245183042989 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977112440638 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993349588304 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163207664846 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537884514163 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.