Nowadays, there are lots of options available for spending leisure time. Television has ranked highest amongst them. Some people advocates that it can make people wasting their time and prohibits them from socialising. I am completely against of this view. My view is justified further.
To begin with, currently people's lifestyle and work schedule has become so hectic that they are in urge of relaxing their mind after returning from work. By watching television, they can declutter themselves from all worries and feel rejuvenating which will ultimately make them refresh and charge their energy for next day. Moreover, recently, there are various programmes that are going on air which are best source of information and knowledge for any age group. Per say ranging from learning how to do craft activity to know about latest current affairs, everything is available on it. These is how people used to expense their free time.
Besides entertainment, good quality time with family and friends is also vital. Now as the trend of nucler family is increasing, watching television while having dinner is seen as good family bonding activity. For instance, fixing a particular show during dinner time is always recommended. Furthermore, many television channels are making sure to arrange some award night functions or sport games especially on weekends so that people can watch them with their family and friends. During last FIFA world cup, all the bars and cafes were flooded with bunch of friends and peers. This is the best way of getting social.
To conclude, television is seen not only seen as a source of knowledge or entertainment but also as a good get together fun source. However, its usage depends from person to person, but in my opinion it is a must required measure in current generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: PER_SE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'per se' (=by itself, by themselves)?
Suggestion: Per se
...mation and knowledge for any age group. Per say ranging from learning how to do craft a...
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Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...arning how to do craft activity to know about latest current affairs, everything is availabl...
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Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[4]
Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...affairs, everything is available on it. These is how people used to expense their fre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08754208754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63021372475 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639730639731 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1709525602 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269066062691 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737931215007 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845620063193 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152715489105 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072924080075 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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