A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Bringing uniformity in the education system within the nation is one of the radical changes often discussed among people with a claim that this measure would reduce disparity and differences in the learning system. While I agree that such uniformity in curriculum would obviously help standarize the nation's education system, I believe such changes would cause extreneous burden to some marganilized groups, which is further explored in the impending paragraphs.
At current, the differences in the education systems with a nation are often the contributing factors for some educational institutions being highly preferred, while some being overlooked by both the parents and the children. This popularity obtained had led the avaricious schools to impose exorbitent amounts in the name of quality education, which are often unaffordable for a working class child. Such that, imposing a nationwide regulation for a uniform curriculum would help reduce such disparity, such that every child can gain all the elementary knowledge, without any financial burden.A good example of this can be seen through the reports of Nepal Education Board, who recently imposed a nation wide curriculum, which induced near 200% growth in the number of admission in the government run schools, while a commensurate decline was seen in the private ones.
In addition, having a uniform education system can be a massive stride for a nation for a standarized measure for analyzing a child's academic progress, as imposing government regulated examination would reduce the malfeasence of some teachers in grading the examination, in other to bolster the school's reputation; which may sound cynical but has been reported more than often, as can be inferred through the number of educational probations and reprimants provided the national education authority of Ghana.
Meanwhile, such standarization would not be jovial for all, as children with special needs would often suffer the flip side. As people of special needs often require special accomodation, home schooling or specialized schooling systems are oftrn in place which provide a specialized set of learning activites as per a person's requirement mostly wih a slower pace. Introducing a nation wide educational curriculum as a stringent rule, would rather leave these hamper the education and learning experinces of such people, discouraging them to lean on the the educational system for their aid.
It is true that imposing a national curriculum would be of great advantange in reducing educational disparity among social classes and aid in bringing a uniform judging system, but imposing such benefits are not ubiquitous as people with special needs are often under the chopping block as a repercussion of such regourous educational system. Thus I believe. an universal educationa system if imposed in a nation, should add enough wiggle room for accomodations for childern with special needs, to make such system beneficial to all.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...lum would obviously help standarize the nations education system, I believe such change...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...knowledge, without any financial burden.A good example of this can be seen throug...
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...Education Board, who recently imposed a nation wide curriculum, which induced near 200% gro...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...he examination, in other to bolster the schools reputation; which may sound cynical but...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ized set of learning activites as per a persons requirement mostly wih a slower pace. I...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...mostly wih a slower pace. Introducing a nation wide educational curriculum as a stringent r...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 550, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ch people, discouraging them to lean on the the educational system for their aid. It...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 550, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ch people, discouraging them to lean on the the educational system for their aid. It...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 344, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...n of such regourous educational system. Thus I believe. an universal educationa syst...
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Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: An
...ous educational system. Thus I believe. an universal educationa system if imposed ...
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Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ous educational system. Thus I believe. an universal educationa system if imposed ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, thus, while, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47071583514 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96082969551 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529284164859 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.556784318 60.3974514979 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.166666667 118.986275619 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4166666667 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144830545856 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658256531161 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268597642173 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990374058153 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150677911214 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.1392134831 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.8420337079 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.8971910112 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...lum would obviously help standarize the nations education system, I believe such change...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...knowledge, without any financial burden.A good example of this can be seen throug...
^
Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...Education Board, who recently imposed a nation wide curriculum, which induced near 200% gro...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...he examination, in other to bolster the schools reputation; which may sound cynical but...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ized set of learning activites as per a persons requirement mostly wih a slower pace. I...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...mostly wih a slower pace. Introducing a nation wide educational curriculum as a stringent r...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 550, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ch people, discouraging them to lean on the the educational system for their aid. It...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 550, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ch people, discouraging them to lean on the the educational system for their aid. It...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 344, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...n of such regourous educational system. Thus I believe. an universal educationa syst...
^^^^
Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: An
...ous educational system. Thus I believe. an universal educationa system if imposed ...
^^
Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ous educational system. Thus I believe. an universal educationa system if imposed ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, thus, while, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47071583514 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96082969551 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529284164859 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.556784318 60.3974514979 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.166666667 118.986275619 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4166666667 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144830545856 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658256531161 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268597642173 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990374058153 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150677911214 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.1392134831 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 48.8420337079 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.8971910112 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.