In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Urbanization has become a phenomenon in many nations all over the world. As a result, the number of rural dwellers is reducing. In my opinion, this is a negative development which can lead to worsening environmental pollution as well as the economic situation.
One serious problem that can arise from the trend of moving to metropolises is the high level of pollution. People from backward villages emigrate to these prosperous areas to earn a living and move up the social ladder. Therefore, the more humans live in the cities, the more vehicles and social interactions appear. These kinds of transport and social activities can release enormous volumes of pollutants such as carbon monoxide or oxides of nitrogen. Consequently, the pollution situation in urban areas, such as air and noise pollution has been aggravated. So, even though the number of people who settle in the countryside is decreasing, the environmental pollution in cities is increasing.
Another issue is the lack of working labor forces in the agricultural sector in the countryside. The majority of the population in rural areas who have endured destitution have to search for work in big cities concluding many industrial zones that hire a huge amount of employees. This trend can lead to serious consequences in the economic sector. For instance, if farmers leave their fields, there will be a deficiency of workers which can cause the decreasing volume of agricultural products such as rice or fruits in each country. Hence, the export output and domestic consumption will drop considerably. And for that reason, the global economic depression will happen.
In conclusion, although it has become more popular for people to relocate from rural areas to urban areas, it has brought many severe problems for this trend to be considered as a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96494424116 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0849676761 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182228330363 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498717015346 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495161512211 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111420220409 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316585255786 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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