Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In today’s world, technology has become an indispensable part of our life, serving as an assistant in various fields from studies, work to entertainment. As a result, children often make use of it in order to improve their studies. However, this trend still remains debatable as some people consider it an effective tool for learning while others think it might have negative impacts on children’s physical and mental development. this essay will elaborate on both views and give my opinion accordingly.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that computers are one of the most helpful tools for learning. To be more specific, computers now can provide children with a variety of useful apps for studying such as Duolingo and Google Classroom. With the help of these apps, children can improve the effectiveness of self-study as well as build a suitable learning schedule for themselves. In addition, students can also study at their own pace without having to keep up with the teacher. moreover, besides providing children with helpful apps, computers also give youngsters access to a large amount of information in various academic fields. this can help learners gain a further understanding of diverse subjects as well as do research for their studies.
On the other hand, I absolutely agree that computers do bring about negative effects on children. First of all, using computers too much leads to numerous physical problems. For instance, children nowadays tend to develop the common habit of gluing their eyes all day to the computer, which in the long run results in poor eyesight or more seriously blindness. moreover, these days youngsters easily get addicted to computers and hardly spend time participating in outdoor activities or doing exercises. therefore, they stand a high risk of suffering obesity, sleeplessness and stroke. also, children’s misuse of computers can badly affect their mental health. To be more specific, excessive use of computers prevents their mind from functioning well, which means youngsters are mentally tired most of the time. this in the long run can lead to depression and other serious mental illnesses.
All things considered, despite a large number of benefits computers have on children, I think the disadvantages certainly outweigh the advantages. therefore, youngsters should be aware of the possible negative effects and learn how to use computers effectively.
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- 20 Computers do help children learn more effectively On the contrary the use of computers has a negative effect on children s physical and mental development To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38903394256 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90927237115 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590078328982 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0794892298 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103306400464 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304165119318 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343384598175 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671510203958 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144004191561 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.