The bar chart illustrates the questionnaire results on the purchase and consumption of coffee and tea by people in five cities in Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart) in four weeks.
Overall, in all cities except one, most people had gone to a cafe to buy coffee or tea in the last four weeks. Meanwhile, the purchase of fresh coffee was relatively unpopular in all five cities.
Melbourne was the city with the highest number of people electing to get their coffee/tea at cafes, at just under 65%, followed closely by Hobart with a number barely under that of Melbourne, and Sydney at just over 60%. The other two cities had relatively lower proportions with approximately 55% in Brisbane and half of the total participants in Adelaide who had gotten their beverages at cafes. In regards to Adelaide, however, it is interesting to note that participants preferred to get their beverages elsewhere rather than cafes, as is seen in all the other cities.
Instant coffee was the second most popular drink in all cities, with the exception of Adelaide, where it edged out cafe-bought drinks by a negligible amount at around 50%. The numbers are higher in Brisbane and Hobart (at around 55%), which were also more than in Melbourne and Sydney, where less than half of people had consumed instant coffee in the previous four weeks. On the other hand, fresh coffee was the least consumed with numbers less than 45% in all cities.
- Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work How far do you agree or disagree with the 78
- Writing task 1 People s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits 67
- The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified Are there any alternatives to animal experimentation 73
- The diagram below illustrates how fossils were exposed beneath a cliff as a result of coastal erosion 61
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...0%. The other two cities had relatively lower proportions with approximately 55% in B...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...ho had gotten their beverages at cafes. In regards to Adelaide, however, it is interesting to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...econd most popular drink in all cities, with the exception of Adelaide, where it edged out cafe-bough...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91836734694 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6091052561 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497959183673 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6375570586 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.888888889 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175049529663 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836980668419 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656977168485 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129307420046 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516440703271 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...0%. The other two cities had relatively lower proportions with approximately 55% in B...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...ho had gotten their beverages at cafes. In regards to Adelaide, however, it is interesting to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...econd most popular drink in all cities, with the exception of Adelaide, where it edged out cafe-bough...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91836734694 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6091052561 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497959183673 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6375570586 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.888888889 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175049529663 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836980668419 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656977168485 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129307420046 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516440703271 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.