The given table illustrates the activities done by the unemployed in Britain in the previous year grouped by both gender and when they are done (morning or afternoon). The activities involve fourteen different pastimes.
Overall, most unemployed UK citizens spent the majority of their time being productive, as seen from the top three pastimes which involve housework, shopping, and job hunting, while the least popular pastime was drinking.
In the top ranked category, housework, jobless UK women spent a disproportionately higher amount of time in comparison to their male counterparts, at approximately three times the number of men. A similar trend is seen for Shopping, where more time was spent by females in the morning (26%) and the afternoon (17%) compared to unemployed men. Most of the unemployed preferred to find jobs in the morning. It is interesting to note, however, that more males preferred to do so in comparison to females, with 22% and 16%, respectively.
Like housework and shopping, another pastime popular among out of work women was visiting friends or relatives, with a proportion around four to five percent higher than the men. In contrast, unemployed men favored activities such as gardening, decorating, watching TV, walking, and playing sports. Nevertheless, a shared feature between both genders is the relative unpopularity of drinking, with less than 5% of both genders spending time on it throughout the day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... housework and shopping, another pastime popular among out of work women was visi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33624454148 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02656947792 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9899990383 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175843305268 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626795814156 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499300513226 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100163411981 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050010843841 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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