Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
Reason: All Actions - even those that seem to be done for other people - are based on self-interest.
Action's are crucial as they give an abstract idea about one's motive in doing so. Action's is dependent on various factor's like objective, long term goal, need for current time and many more. Sometime, it varies from place to place, person to person, geography to geography. It's and speculative thing to find the root cause or main motive behind action. Action's intensity too matter's on various scale like on international affair's or local / internal matter's. No can truly predict one's motive for action unless that action result's in either good or bad outcome and this has to verified by a trusted sources.
First is the example of Russia-Ukraine war, Russia claim's the start of war as the ethnic minority staying on border area's of Ukraine were suffering from inquest from Ukrainian Government. Russia cite the reason with the United Nation's charter which allow bordering country to attack other country when a minority ask's for help. But, while Ukraine and it's allay denies it and mark's the reason as distraction from main objective. While the world is in perplex situation, true motive will be uncovered once the war is over and thoroughly analysis is done.
Second is the example of A Raja, Member of Parliament of India. Who own's various charitable trust's which help's poor people to earn at least minimum amount of wage's to live an satisfied life. But, some citizen's state that A Raja is using his charitable trust's to convert his black money to white money which was earned from "2G Scam". Well, these are just surmise and true reason's are unknown from the world. To uncover this trusted source should check for this speculation's.
Third is the example of Harshad Mehta, person well known for his "Stock Exchange Scam" in 1992 in India. Every broker used to follow for his way on using market to earn money. He was accused of manipulating stock's to earn money and do fraud with normal citizen's. This scam was uncovered by a journalist and government took action's against the Harshad. But till date, not even government was able to prove a single charge he was accused.
I do not completely agree with the claim as well as with the reason. While some acts are inspired by the self-centric, some are not and the reason can vary behind such action's but ane must thoroughly analyse the situation before forming any opine for such action's.
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- Law should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places 66
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ial as they give an abstract idea about ones motive in doing so. Actions is dependen...
^^^^
Line 1, column 480, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... internal matters. No can truly predict ones motive for action unless that action re...
^^^^
Line 1, column 598, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
...e and this has to verified by a trusted sources. First is the example of Russia-Ukrain...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'cites'.
Suggestion: cites
...quest from Ukrainian Government. Russia cite the reason with the United Nations char...
^^^^
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Russia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cites'.
Suggestion: cites
...quest from Ukrainian Government. Russia cite the reason with the United Nations char...
^^^^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... A Raja, Member of Parliament of India. Who owns various charitable trusts which he...
^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t least minimum amount of wages to live an satisfied life. But, some citizens stat...
^^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...er this trusted source should check for this speculations. Third is the example of ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, well, while, as to, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87810945274 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45983191464 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3751364739 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1363636364 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186603290923 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451378027366 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374690799612 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929913724641 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347058468793 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ial as they give an abstract idea about ones motive in doing so. Actions is dependen...
^^^^
Line 1, column 480, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... internal matters. No can truly predict ones motive for action unless that action re...
^^^^
Line 1, column 598, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
...e and this has to verified by a trusted sources. First is the example of Russia-Ukrain...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'cites'.
Suggestion: cites
...quest from Ukrainian Government. Russia cite the reason with the United Nations char...
^^^^
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Russia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cites'.
Suggestion: cites
...quest from Ukrainian Government. Russia cite the reason with the United Nations char...
^^^^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... A Raja, Member of Parliament of India. Who owns various charitable trusts which he...
^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t least minimum amount of wages to live an satisfied life. But, some citizens stat...
^^
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...er this trusted source should check for this speculations. Third is the example of ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, well, while, as to, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87810945274 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45983191464 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60447761194 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3751364739 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1363636364 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186603290923 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451378027366 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374690799612 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929913724641 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347058468793 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.