In today's fast-paced world, the motivation for people to remain active in the workforce stems from a multitude of factors, with financial considerations holding a significant place. However, in addition to financial stability, several other pivotal factors drive individuals to continue working, and these factors are contingent on various situations and personal characteristics.
First and foremost, work-life balance deserves mention as a crucial determinant of career choices. Presently, a considerable number of young professionals prioritize an improved quality of life, which encompasses a harmonious equilibrium between their work and personal lives. For some, a job offering a lower income but flexible working hours, reduced stress, and a harmonious fit with their personal lifestyle may outweigh the lure of higher earnings. Work-life balance, therefore, stands as a significant motivator, often on par with or even above financial compensation.
Furthermore, passion and personal interests can serve as potent drivers for individuals in their professional pursuits. There exists a fortunate segment of individuals who find themselves in careers that resonate with their passions and interests. For these individuals, the intrinsic rewards derived from engaging in work they are passionate about supersedes the importance of financial incentives. The satisfaction garnered from following one's passion can be a compelling motivator.
In addition to passion, various benefits and job security considerations often take precedence over a mere salary figure. Over the long term, individuals may value employment that offers healthcare benefits, retirement plans, enticing insurance coverage, and rewards for their dedication and performance. These benefits contribute significantly to an individual's overall well-being and stability, making them a compelling factor to stay in the workforce.
It is important to recognize that motivations can evolve with age and changing life circumstances. Younger professionals may prioritize career growth and skill development as they aspire to build their futures, while older workers often place a higher value on stability and the assurance of a comfortable retirement.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that financial considerations play a critical role in motivating people to remain in the workforce. However, it is equally important to acknowledge that it is not always the primary or most significant factor for everyone. Depending on an individual's unique circumstances, priorities, and values, factors such as work-life balance, passion, or benefits may hold more sway in their decision to continue working.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...se benefits contribute significantly to an individuals overall well-being and stability, makin...
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Line 11, column 269, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...icant factor for everyone. Depending on an individuals unique circumstances, priorities, and v...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98955613577 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29906074281 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577023498695 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.728767228 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.444444444 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117706774811 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403830021499 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529765232974 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722763256921 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669978552623 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...se benefits contribute significantly to an individuals overall well-being and stability, makin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 269, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...icant factor for everyone. Depending on an individuals unique circumstances, priorities, and v...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98955613577 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29906074281 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577023498695 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.728767228 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.444444444 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117706774811 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403830021499 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529765232974 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722763256921 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669978552623 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.